When my world crashes down,
You go down with it
When we're all moving on
You fall and lose your place
When we're all in the future
You're caught in the past
Oh boy, can't you follow with grace
When you're waking up slowly
The rest of the worlds walked out
When you're thinking that surely
You catch up and find your way again
When we're all shaken up
You walk in with that crooked smile
Boy, can't you follow with grace
Boy, wipe that smile off your face
As if I know what your plan is right now
As if I know how you're feeling right now
Hearts are there to be broken,
So suck it up and take it like a man
I know you can
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First two verses + chorus of a song I'm working on. Constructive criticism?
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